F.S Chapter 16: Tomoya Becaming a Fan

F.S Chapter 15: Asuna's first Indirect kiss.
F.S Chapter 17: The Devil that was treated
“Okay, I will send it now.”
 
Since the writing software on the Phone and computer are linked, what he wrote yesterday can be found on his phone too, which was convenient. Mu Fan selected the words and send them directly to Tomoya.
 
In any case, Tomoya was a world-renowned Blogger, so he should be able to see the cons of a book and whether I could make a hit in the market or not.
 
Tomoya was also an Otaku, he usually loved reading novels, watching anime and playing games. He made comments on his block every now and then about light novels which received support from many fans. He became a well-known blogger for AVG information. It can be said that he has read countless light novels and his understanding of them is quite profound.
 
Today, since he knew Mu Fan as they worked together on a restaurant before, he didn’t mind helping Mu Fan since the latter just started writing. He wanted to point out every mistake and give Mu Fan some guidance, but when he saw Mu Fan’s novel, he was actually quite surprised.
 
“The story of <<Accel World>> occurs in the future when everyone has a microcomputer called NeuroLinker that connect them to the network directly and because of some program, the user can accelerate their brainwaves to the point that time seems to stop.”
 
Although the story was simple, from the perspective of an experienced person who knows about novels, this kind of novel isn’t easy to be written by someone who just started writing.
 
As soon as he saw this simple introduction, Tomoya lost interest in continuing. The subject of Science Fiction wasn’t that popular these days, and from the nerve connection device they have the setting shouldn’t be that good.
 
But as he looked down, Tomoya’s brows wrinkled.
 
Haruyuki “Haru” Arita is a short, overweight boy who is frequently ridiculed by delinquents at the Umesato Junior High School. Using his Neuro Linker to escape the torment of real life, he logs onto the school’s Local Network cyberspace where he always plays virtual squash alone.
 
In today’s novels and Animes, Taking fat people as the starting point of a story is definitively a big taboo. After all, people who read novel can probably imagine their favorite characters in their hearts, but if the protagonist is a fat person, I’m afraid that people won’t be able to persist on reading.
 
Not to mention that fat man is relatively weak and incapable of doing anything except being bullied.
 
 
However, because of the protagonist being so weak, He wanted to see his counter-attack to resolve all of the bullyings. As Tomoya continued to read, He didn’t notice that he was completely Engrossed in reading.
 
Although he was weak, his personality was the greatest strength this novel had.
 
The next day, Kuroyukihime, the school’s popular, highly intellectual and attractive female Student Council Vice-President added him to the ranks of Burst Linkers, a secret program that is able to accelerate the human cognitive process to the point at which time appears to stop. And using this same program Kuroyukihime helped him get rid of the bullies.
 
Haruyuki soon learns that Brain Burst is more than just a program, but an Augmented Reality Massively Multiplayer Online (ARMMO) Fighting Game where people fight each other in fierce duels in order to obtain Burst Points which can be spent for acceleration abilities in the real world. Kuroyukihime then enlists Haruyuki’s help in reaching Level 10…
 
 
The story comes to an end with more than 40,000 words.
 
After watching all the current plots, Tomoya was completely stunned. This kind of novel where you can accelerate and affect the world can’t be found in any novel nowadays. Tomoya wanted to see what happens next but that’s all there is now.
 
As a well-known blogger, Tomoya looked at countless novels, from what he just read he can predict that Accel world is definitively a masterpiece. And because it’s the first masterpiece of it’s kind it can get a lot of success.
 
“Mu Fan, This novel was written so well that I couldn’t think of you as a new writer. What happens next in the story?”
 
Tomoya praised Mu Fan and wanted to know what happens next as he couldn’t wait.
 
Mu Fan who was inside the Cooking club room saw Tomoya’s reply and couldn’t help but smile as he expected this from the start.
 
This novel, after all, is one of it’s kind, you can see the Protagonist as a knight who wanted to protect his princess but because he is too weak so he continues to struggle and grow for her sake.
 
Moreover, this novel was a masterpiece even in his previous world where there were more Novels than the ones found here.
 
New Write?
 
Mu Fan picked his eyebrows. He wrote for four or five years before, but he wasn’t in this world when he did so.
 
“If you know what will happen, it won’t be as interesting when you read it. A qualified Author won’t spoil for his readers.”
 
Mu Fan smiled and sent the message.
 
“Oh, that’s right.”
 
Tomoya was too eager to continue reading the story that he forgot that people hated spoilers in Anime and novels. Then he thought about what Mu Fan said before and asked: “Mu Fan, Are you going to publish this ASCII Media Works? I do know an author there, if you want we can go together this Saturday, I will introduce you.”
 
“Okay, Actually, I’m preparing to participate in the new comer’s competition that ASCII Media Works is holding. Now that you know someone there, let’s go on Saturday.”
 
“That’s good then the follow-up story should be written quickly. If I can’t read it quickly I will die.”
 
“Relax, I won’t let you die.”
 
 
Mu Fan finished his talk with Tomoya and started writing his novel again. At this time Asuna came over and took a look at the text that was being typed rapidly on the phone and asked In amazement: “Mu Fan, You… Are you writing a novel?”
 
“Yeah.”
 
Mu Fan nodded and remembered that Asuna was singing a song from an anime and he couldn’t help but ask: “Do you like reading light novels?”
 
“My Family has always brought many famous books for me to read. I was really tired of reading them! So when I have little free time, I go read some light novels to relax. Just like “Koi Kaze” the light novel that I recently read.”
 
Asuna said so and went to the opposite chair in front of Mu Fan and sat there. She held her chin and looked at Mu Fan curiously while her two peaks were resting on the table.
 
Asuna is a beauty recognized in the school as a Goddess, It’s not far that she will turn into a completely hot stunning beauty.
 
“Mu Fan, what is the name of your novel?” Asuna asked in a curious tone.
 
Upon hearing Asuna’s question, Mu Fan quickly moved his gaze from her peaks and honestly said: “It’s called Accel World.”
 
“Can I see?”
 
“It’s not complete yet as I just started writing it. When I write some more I will give it to you so you can read it.”
 
He really didn’t have any problem in Asuna reading it, it’s just it’s still too short as he didn’t write that much yet. Also, Accel world’s story is somewhat slow. She will have to wait for a while.
 
“Well then, you definitively must let me see it when you finish writing it.” Hearing what Mu Fan aid, Asuna nodded.
 
“Ok, no problem at all.” Mu Fan smiled and when he was about to say something, Mu Fan heard some commotion at the door of the club behind him. The two turned to see what’s going on.
 
At the entrance, there was a petite girl dressed in a brown blouse and a plaid skirt. Her hair was wine-red with a bat-shaped hairpin on her head and also she had a tiger tooth on her mouth which looked really cute. The girl came in as she swaggered toward the table and sat down. She raised her head up and looked at Mu Fan with a proud smile and said.
 
“I am the great Devil Satania, The person who unified Hell, Human beings, come on, Give me a Plain noodle bowl from the sign you put outside!”
 
“Puff!”
 
Hearing this sentence, the water in Mu Fan’s mouth was sprayed out. He turned his head and saw Asuna looking at him.
 
The two looked at each other seeing the helplessness in each other’s eyes, and then turned toward the girl while looking at her with pity…
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
T/N: Hey there this is TsOtaku I wish you like the story so far and happy with the releases, I just posted the chap 29 in Patreon if you’re interested in reading more chaps please support us and hit the button below.
F.S Chapter 15: Asuna's first Indirect kiss.
F.S Chapter 17: The Devil that was treated
Liked it? Take a second to support TranslatinOtaku on Patreon!

5 thoughts on “F.S Chapter 16: Tomoya Becaming a Fan

  • July 22, 2018 at 9:24 am
    Permalink

    Thanks for the chapter

  • July 22, 2018 at 12:09 pm
    Permalink

    Ty

  • July 22, 2018 at 5:12 pm
    Permalink

    Thanks!

  • July 22, 2018 at 10:22 pm
    Permalink

    Thanks for the translation.

    By the way, is posibble for this site to have a night mode, or at least some theme with black background? Or allow the reader mode in Firefox?

  • July 25, 2018 at 9:32 am
    Permalink

    Best Waifu Satania-chan has arrived!!!

Comments are closed.

error: Content is protected !!